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Sunday, May 11, 2008

Irrefutable Lover

A knife stapled to his fingertips
Darkness shining in his eyes
Blood from his jacket faithfully drips
In defiance he wears no disguise.

Thanks for watching, go away now
Thanks for bearing, leave me alone
Thanks for living, when you dont know how
Thanks for caring, hang up the phone.

He stands over as you lay on the ground
truth falling from the lies he discovered
all emotions ripped apart, all demons found.
Lost unto the irrefutable lover.

Thanks for coming, go away now
Thanks for sharing, leave me alone
Thanks for running, when you dont know how
Thanks for crying, hang up the phone.

Stabbed in the back.
Love lost forever.
Gained what you lack.
You'll never get better.

Thanks for dancing, go away now
thanks for singing, leave me alone
thanks for loving when you dont know how
Thanks for dying, now pick up the phone.

4 comments:

Poet In The Jar said...

Very very dark but omg, how good it is. Especially the last stanza... loved how you wrote it like, "thank you for xxx" and repeated that throughout... It's lovely. One of my favourites out of yours. Even though it's sad :'|

:)

Ryan said...

Thanks :P I really liked it... it was kinda random but it was fun to write :D

Alev said...

Seconded! It's just amazing with it's sadness, a great piece of work! :)

Ryan said...

:D thanks Alev!!