Lost in Darkness.
No way out.
A pitch black Hell.
I Scream and Shout.
You're not there.
I'm all alone.
I don't know where.
Lost in Darkness.
A thousand empty doors.
A pitch black Hell.
My feet covered in sores.
You search to save me.
I'm still alone.
Searching for light to see.
Lost in Darkness.
Traps set in every direction.
A pitch black Hell.
Only lit by your reflection.
Your voice radiates in my mind.
I'm still alone.
Search and you shall find.
Lost in Darkness.
But finding my way.
A pitch black Nightmare.
Being won over by day.
When you are there.
I'll never be alone.
Anywhere.
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To my friends overseas, Becca (my guide) and Alev (my light) thanks for saving me so many times.
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- Ryan
- Newfoundland, Canada
- I'm tall, I got red hair and I write. Poetry is a new thing for me, prose is my element. I'm a Poets of The Fall Fan and i'm figuring a LOT out about myself.
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- Your not as fat as you think you are, in fact forget ever thinking such non sense and get on with your life
- Beautiful people dont make you ugly, they just make you more real.
- Advice is never clear, follow it as you believe it, if its warped forget it. Not all advice is worth your attention, some people just dont know what they're talking about.
- Love is made to be found, if lost find more. You shouldn't linger, I have to express this with the most urgency.
- Its getting colder in the fall, the winter'll be worse. The only thing good about this is SNOW!!! and of course the comfort of blankets wrapped around you like a cucoon as you watch your favorite TV show.
- The winter is dark a lot I know but look at it as I do. Light shines just that much brighter in the darkness.
- Sleep will come, you may be tired now but eventually the opprotunity for a nap will arise.
- If someone's mad at you, apologise. Life is too short to hold a grudge, even if the other person did something wrong. If you succeed in this tell me how.
- Family and friends are there to annoy you, forgive them, friends are who you have to stick with and family are your best link to the past.
- Love finds everyone, though it may not always be as you wanted, you may love chocolate or a special pet or a nephew or niece, Live with that kind of love 'til the real stuff comes around
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5 comments:
Ohhhh Ryan! *blushes*
You know, I thought this poem really sucked me in, and that was even before I realized who it'd been dedicated to... that's so sweet! =) I'm so glad I have you guys, you keep making my day, constantly.
Love the recurring "a pitch black hell." very strong lines!
And once again, ryan, thank you so much. I'm completely blushing here. <3
Thanks, your praise made my day (not just because i had a boring day either)
Awww! This poem really made my day when I first read it, you are ever so sweet Ryan! I'm just happy that you feel that way and I was actually a help. :D THANKS SO MUCH!! <3 :D
No trouble alev, I just had to express the truth and usual words didn't really seem to make a true impression so... this came out of it.
:)
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